Director treatments

I write treatments for commercial directors and production companies. I focus on conveying the director's unique vision in their own personal voice and style while clearly addressing any agency or client ambitions, desires, or concerns. As a line producer for nearly thirty years, I understand that a treatment must do more than merely pitch creative ideas. It is part of the bid package and must convey creativity, production savvy, and confident problem solving.
That is what I deliver.

What I write

  • Auto
  • Comedy
  • Docustyle
  • Fashion+Beauty
  • Film+TV
  • Food+Bev
  • Healthcare
  • Kids+Family
  • Sports+Fitness
  • Travel+Tourism
  • Visual Poetry
  • Narrative Storytelling

From recent treatments

Introduction

I grew up in Northern California. I know the light there. The way golden hour settles over Sacramento, the Central Valley, and the foothills. It’s warm, soft, and honest.

I know, too, the feeling of community there. Neighbors who actually know each other. The particular pride of place that comes from putting down roots.

I know this audience.

When I read these scripts, I felt immediately that this wasn’t a campaign about a credit union. It’s a campaign about belonging. About the quiet, steady presence of someone in your corner. About forward momentum and the way life moves, the way we grow, and the way we show up for each other.

I want to shoot these films with love, with specificity, and by always seeing the beauty in the real. Warm and honest. Golden but not glossy, and wholeheartedly California.

Picture this

Imagine a furry crime syndicate that is so fiercely competent, so wonderfully obsessed, so wildly ambitious that if they were any larger than river-dwelling rodents, the entire northern hemisphere’s stock of premium lumber would be wiped out.

These guys are the undisputed masters of the grand caper. Drawn to the iconic Yella tag like visionaries to a golden artifact, they work as a highly synchronized special-ops team designed for pure tactical action: rapid-deployment zip-lines, perfectly calibrated thermite charges, and the awe-inspiring deployment of a three-story wooden Trojan Beaver.

But their missions are about more than stealing lumber. They are on a mythic, splinter-filled quest to build their very own backwoods, five-star beaver utopia.

Composition & movement

Modern. Alive. Textured. Handheld. Dolly. Static.

We’ll move (or, at times, remain still) with energy and intention. Our camera will anticipate, react to, and breathe with our actors. We’ll live in the moment with them, and then we’ll punctuate a special beat with a graphic angle, a sudden close-up, a lingering hold.

The Image

I’ll approach the moving image classically. Anamorphic lenses, longer lenses to compress space, tracks and dollies, deliberate frames and characters moving through real geography.

The camera doesn’t need to cut around desperately trying to manufacture charm. We’ll simply build the world and let our actors be charming inside it.

There will be texture to the image, a classic grain, a gentle halation around the Christmas bulbs and neon, rich and tactile detail in our characters’ faces, true blacks, dirty fluorescents, amber, turquoise and cherry red.

I’ll keep the methodology nimble: Steadicam and stabilized gimbal for elegant moves we can achieve quickly, proper dolly and track when the shot deserves it, and a second camera body where it genuinely helps us move faster.

Casting

Real faces. Real energy. Real diversity. The way California actually looks. Natural and real. We want people whose mere presence can hold the frame without looking like they’re performing.

Chemistry here is everything. The father-son bond. The sibling love. The playful ease between our middle-aged couple. We’ll cast actors who perform with natural effortlessness. Actors who intuitively understand that less is more. That a glance can be more emotional than a big gesture. And we’ll take time in callbacks to pair them and mix and match them to find just the right chemistry.

Tone

Authenticity is our north star. This hospital wing, the doctors, the dialog and the performances are all absolutely grounded in reality. The sports fans’ ‘conditions’ are the ONLY absurd element, and even those are treated with the grounded gravitas of a real-life hospital situation. It’s that contrast that makes the idea so funny.

We talked about The Pitt and I think that’s a great reference for the modern medical drama. It’s real, and it’s in the moment. Also, it reflects a distinctive level of professionalism. That’s what we want to feel here. Even though these fan symptoms are absurdist, the doctors and nurses at IMH still treat them with patience, confidence and intention.

A beautiful, grounded reality

The phrase I keep coming back to is elevated cinematic reportage.

This is not a documentary style. It is reality made more immediate and beautiful by paying real attention to it. Our images will have weight and power, be beautifully composed and deeply considered, but will feel a little more found and less predicted, as though we are catching up with moments rather than arranging them for the camera. I want to find and witness the reflection moments rather than telegraph them.

The camera will move with instinct rather than predetermined choreography. A nurse crosses frame, momentarily obscuring our view. A glance is caught rather than presented. Faces appear and disappear through layers of glass, or flick briefly into view as a monitor moves. The hospital remains alive and in motion around our characters.

Approach & tone

This campaign centers on observational comedy with cinematic restraint.

The humor comes from recognizable situations, authentic behavior, and small moments of realization rather than punchlines. Each story begins in a familiar world, then reveals something slightly unexpected, whether it’s a moving truck that moves only three houses away, an apartment thoroughly overtaken by a growing business, or a first-day office tour that becomes increasingly confusing…and suspicious.

The comedy works because the situations are treated sincerely. Our characters take their circumstances seriously, and so do we. Nobody plays for the laugh. They’re in it for real.

The script

We begin with a young woman in her mid-twenties at her first consultation. There’s youth and individuality to her, a sense of an entire life stretching ahead. Her doctor sits opposite, close and completely present.

As the camera moves gently around them, evening light catches a glass cabinet and the young woman’s reflection appears on the glass and then, almost imperceptibly, becomes the doctor’s face.

VO: When we see you… we see ourselves.

The Film

NIGHT. WIDE.

Two illuminated buildings face one another across a dark road. Uninspiring neon signs glow above each storefront. DINER on one side. 24/7 CONVENIENCE directly across. A car whispers down the road between them and its taillights are quickly swallowed in the darkness.

INT. CONVENIENCE STORE.

JINGLE. The bell over the door rings. DALE enters.

CLUNK. He punches in on a slightly retro mechanical time clock.

DRIBBLE. He sets an empty coffee pot on the burner. Coffee dribbles in.

STAB. He stabs a fresh hot dog onto the rotating skewer.

Dale’s night shift begins.

Full treatment text available on request. Request samples

How a job typically runs

  1. You send the materialsSend me the agency deck, scripts, boards, bid specs, the call recording if there is one, any important information received in email exchanges with the agency or director, and the director's notes or first rough draft.
  2. I writeI write a first draft or rewrite the director's first draft, using the director's voice and style.
  3. We reviseRounds of notes with the director and/or production company until all are happy.
  4. I deliverFinal text, proofed and ready for the designer to lay out.

What I listen for

The agency scripts, boards, and creative decks tell us what the agency and client's goals are. The call tells us which ideas the agency responds to and what worries them.

A good treatment supports their ambitions and answers their worries before anyone has to ask.

Background

I was a commercial line producer for nearly thirty years, producing live action, motion graphics and animation with Brand New School, Buck, National Television, Pytka, Radley, Scott Miller and Troika, for clients including Coca-Cola, Toyota, McDonald's, Nike, HBO, Disney and United Airlines. From 2017 to 2025, I was the bidding producer at Spears & Arrows. I have written or edited nearly a hundred treatments.

Recent treatments

  • Allegheny Health Network
  • AtlantiCare
  • Better Than Bouillon
  • Blue Bunny
  • Carle Health
  • Church's Chicken
  • ComEd
  • Discover
  • Energizer
  • Frito-Lay
  • Georgia Lottery
  • Golden 1 Credit Union
  • H-E-B
  • Highmark Health
  • Indiana University Health
  • Intermountain Health
  • J-B Weld
  • Maryland Lottery
  • NHTSA
  • Orlando Health
  • Panera
  • Planet Fitness
  • Purina
  • QDOBA
  • Select Health
  • Sweet Loren's
  • Symetra
  • Texas Children's Hospital
  • Toyota RAV4
  • YellaWood